Persuasive Essay

Brian Lin L&L G6

One problem in KAS is, the students of KAS are using computers in negative ways by; relying too much on them, using time to play games, and not participating in outside activities. How can we resolve this problem? We should stop using computers now for education, we should start with our handwriting for our future!

Students who is entering into middle school is using their computer for education, but is it really helping them? Middle School Students are relying too much on computers, and when you focus on computer all day, it can hurt your body, and you won’t be able to learn! If you use computer to type projects and summatives, what about your future? According to Jawad Khan from byte-notes: “Young generation is now spending more time on the social media websites like Facebook, Twitter, etc or texting their friends all night through smartphones.” We are spending times using social media websites to hangout with friends, this might be educating, but it can also be dangerous when you are online all day.

Also, students are using computers for negative purposes, school teachers and principals thinks that computers are for education only, but some students might not, they do not have the determination to control themselves from playing games. According to Jawad Khan from byte-notes: “Many people use computers without positive purpose. They play games and chat for a long period of time. It causes wastage of time and energy. “ Students are wasting time on chatting and gaming, first, they don’t help to educate, second, they destroys our lives in the future.

Now, students aren’t participating in sports and any afterschool activities, and even though they joined activities, they talk about games they played, and not following directions and put any effort in it. Kenze 94 from wordpress: “The game requires the player to sweat, bleed, fight, and move alongside with reality. Both activities that are polar opposites, yet ironically, have the same purpose: to entertain us people.” Game makes us more and more interesting, you won’t stop, it entertained you so much, games even makes us act like characters in it.

The easiest way that we can solve this problem is by controlling yourself, also, we can just use handwriting instead of typing, this can help us not play games, interact with friends more, participate more in sports, and making our future the best.