Field Trip
By: Evelyn
My field trip was great. We saw amazing things.What I like best is the time when we got to be in the boat and look at the cute crab and the amazing trees and the most beautiful birds and the thing that is so cool is that when the person point at the bird with the laser pen the bird didn’t fly away!
But the peoples that I am most thankful is the adults that took care of us. Especially Paganini’s mom she. She prepare the lunch for the almost every single kid plus Ms.Martin and Ms. Chigaris! And that must be a lot of money. I love the way they are all so nice! Like Emily’s mom she is like taking every detail she see and everytime I turn around to see what she is doing(because she was soo quiet) she is like chik chik chik turning around chik chik chik. And I remember when Megan got mud on her shoes and needed wet tissue paper to get the mud off and Emily’s mom gave her wet tissue and asked do you need dry ones or do you need a trash can?
One thing that I really like too is that I see a lot of people sharing and helping each other. For example Claire and Momoko. I remember Momo didn’t have enough coins to buy the cc lemon she wanted when everybody is drinking it and Claire insisted to buy Momo one.And like Kyrai and me. I forgot to bring my snack and Kyrai shared her fruits and bago. I am very thankful for the school I have and the friends I have.
During the month of November we wrote a novel here is the Excerpt: I thought of the dream and knew it won’t be true how can it be true I am health I am like the healthiest kid in my class how can I have cancer the one of the biggest bully came and said who are you talking to? Nobody I sobbed he said no no no nobodoy? Yeah right he answered then he said hey you guys this girl is a freeaak he yelled everyone agreed like YEAH!!!! I wanted to cry but if I do they will call me a cry baby and write it on my locker after I clean it and I don’t want that to happen he went back to his seat laughing like haha. I took a deep breath and thought it is so unfair but, life is never fair so I guess this is normal but, I should stand up for myself it is the right thing to do I have been waiting for like 3 years for a upstander and nobody came not including my mom and my sister called Coral.. Nobody! The bus stopped and when I got off the biggest bully took his sharpie out and I knew he was going to write on my locker again I took a deep breath again. I took my sanitizer spray and my mop the bully turned around and said Hey! Cleaning lady! He spilled his fruit punch all over a part of the bus and said you better clean that up the bus driver won’t be happy and left laughing the driver said clean that up! So I did clean it up I didn’t want to ask the cleaning lady to help so I did it myself and the other show off said OMG she is so stupid she could just call the cleaning ladys. I took a deep breath and they (started their conversation like you know they are like so stupid they don’t clean well if I were their boss I would already fire them said the ringleader the followers agreed like Yeah!
Reflection
I always think about things in my life to get more idea. Like I always think about mom being mad or Ethan putting his dirty socks on my sheets. I sometimes stop the music to make me focus because I always think about the music and want to sing with it and makes me forget about my writing. Sometimes I wear the jeans that is very tight and you can’t really stretch it so I would go back to my seat or take a deep breath.I really like this project and I really think others will do too. First I know a lot of kids like to listen to music and plus I am a kid too. I know that most of the kids want to make their parents proud I know because that is how kids would want to be the student council president, vice president and secretary or it is because they want to show off or they really care about if they will get in college. I really want to be a writer because it was something I never thought I could do and I am pretty sure other student would not think of too.
I would want to do this project again but, I would want Ms.Martin to type too and instead of just sitting there watching us type she can do one too. And since I have been reading some myth books and I really like it f I can do this project again I want to make a story up about myths. And since myths are not true then it will be a fiction one and I will type a fiction one if I can. Sometimes I really don’t like using computer so much so I would like to write it on paper then type it.
About the Author
Evelyn is 10 years old and has a last name called chao (which is “hi” in Italian). Back to what Evelyn likes. She really likes Japanese making kits. You may not know what they are but,they are these small cute candy you make at home yourself. You usually need things you already have at home and the others materious they will give you in the pack. The company is most likely Meiji or Popin Cookin. Evelyn likes to make it and eat after. On the other hand she has a mom a dad and a brother. Evelyn’s mom is very strict and has high expectation. While her dad has a fun and funny personality. And last but not least a weird brother called Ethan. He is always stinky even after his shower, he is afraid to sleep alone and he is very childish.
Blurb
Roxanne went to “Magic Mountain” to take a break from the bullies, the pushing and the locker writing. In Magic Mountain they saw the 2 biggest bullies in Roxanne’s life, walk pass having a perfect date, and it was about to get better. By the time they walked pass Roxanne. But things didn’t turn out the way 2 of the big bullies wanted. Roxanne’s mom made the best weapon Roxanne will ever want. Will it be a thing or a person? Is it going to be violent or normal? Well, it was a normal phone and a phone number. Not just any number these are the 2 biggest bullies parents phone number! But will this help the problem Roxanne is dealing with? It sounds like won’t but, it is what they fear! They fear their parents! But it was only helping Roxanne to stand up for herself she hasn’t meet the real problem yet!
Well, in the first day of school Roxanne had a dream that she had cancer and died but, we don’t know if it was the truth yet! But there was one thing she found out and it was that if she stands up for herself she forgets about the dream but, when she is always getting bullied she thinks about the dream all day long! Will the dream be true or she is just thinking too much ? Can she still be the Roxanne she used to be?