I like your drawing because you used rainbow colours, not just one colour. Also, you writing is so neat that you can read it easily.
I think you could improve by sounding out the words, not just writing, but also sounding out. Perhaps you could think about the spelling for your story too.
I like your drawing because you used rainbow colours, not just one colour. Also, you writing is so neat that you can read it easily.
I think you could improve by sounding out the words, not just writing, but also sounding out. Perhaps you could think about the spelling for your story too.
How long did your writing take?