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  1. I liked how you used finger spaces between words. It really looked like I could fit two of my fingers between the words. The pictures are really nice because they match with the story. Also, your spelling is really good.

    Maybe next time, you should put a full stop before a capital letter.

    How did you know what picture to draw?

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