13 comments

  1. Michelle I love your voice, I really like the lyrics too. I feel that this song is really true because we made mistakes and we will also make mistakes no one is perfect.

  2. I think you did a great job on analyzing the three articles, and I think you are awesome at creating songs and lyric. They are easy to understand when they are meaningful. I really like how you talk about your own feelings in the song.

  3. Great job Michelle! Your paragraphs and song are thoughtful and well done. I admire the effort that you put into your work whether it is large or small, you always strive to show your best at all times. It’s a difficult but admirable goal.

  4. I think you did well on filming your song. I really like how you sing it and the lyrics you wrote. You did well with gestures and eye-contacting. Also, I like your TIEA. It’s detailed. You wrote clear analysis. Good job!

  5. I personally think you did an awesome job on your TIEAs! They are all very clear and detailed. I especially like your second TIEA, because you did a great job on describing the creator’s choice and then included your thoughts in your analysis. Your song and video are great as well! Your voice is sweet and clear. Your lyrics made me feel hopeful! Finally, I want to say overall, you did a great job and I really like your project! 🙂

  6. I like the way that you have actions in your song and your voice is clear so we can understand even without looking at the lyrics. Your parody can relate to other people. Well done! Your TIEAs included a lot of details and examples.

  7. I think that your voice is very nice! I like your song and you sang very clearly so I can understand the meaning of your song and it’s very relatable. It’s very inspiring and gives people hope.

  8. I think that you did really good on filming the song and I could understand the lyrics without even reading your lyrics. I also thought that you did a good job on your TIEA explaining about the animals and how they are the same as us because they also have a life and a family.

  9. I think you are really aggressive because you sing and your voice can go kind of high the best thing is your voice matches the back group music almost all the part!!!

  10. I think you put a lot of effort into this project and it is evident in your TIEAs, which were both very organized and analyzed very well. I like how your pronunciation in the video is clear and your lyrics were very powerful. Great job! 😀

  11. I thought your voice was very soft and you sing the song very well, I thought the music at the beginning was too small but I can still hear. Your T.I.E.A have many details, good~.

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