I like how you describe about yourself as a example. Also I think you described looking forward really well giving other people hope to work harder. Last but not least I think that you did a great job at giving out your own perspective.
I like the way that you used vocabularies and talked about why you should think about your own future in your speech. In your first TIEA, I think that you did a great job on finding the similarities for the 3 TIEAs that you chose.
I like how you gave a lot of examples to support your ideas in your speech, I think you did a good job on describing your topic.
I like how you made your TIEAs really easy to understand.
I like how you give information to support your evidence. I think you did a great job on your speech and I like how you give advice to the audience about moving forward and looking up to your future.
I liked how you gave a lot of examples in the speech and that you talked about what you think about your future. Also in the TIEA I liked how you found the connections between the 3 texts you chose.
I really like the way you use many example in the TIEA. I think that your speech is very detailed and I think that you did a good job doing your example.
I like the way you used the vocabularies and how you tried to keep eye contract during the speech. In your first TIEA I also you think you did a good job describing the similarities.
You did a great job! I really like your Speech you make a lot of example on it and is very detailed. I like the way you use example on TIEA. I like your speech topic looking forward.
I like the way how you used many examples including you own life experiences. Also I think it is really good of you to use different vocabularies. In the analysing part you did a really good job! 🙂
I like how you used personal experiences in your speech as evidence, because we can relate to it more. You also had detailed TIEA and it was clear and easy to understand.
I thought you use a few sentence to write your T.I.E.A. but it have many details in it, and in the speech you use you to be the example that was a good idea.
In your second T.I.E.A., you say everyone need to be honest, don’t lie to each others, that is important in our life. Also I like the idea of your speech because usually people will only focus on now and the past, not really care about future. Good job!
I like how you describe about yourself as a example. Also I think you described looking forward really well giving other people hope to work harder. Last but not least I think that you did a great job at giving out your own perspective.
I like the way that you used vocabularies and talked about why you should think about your own future in your speech. In your first TIEA, I think that you did a great job on finding the similarities for the 3 TIEAs that you chose.
I like how you gave a lot of examples to support your ideas in your speech, I think you did a good job on describing your topic.
I like how you made your TIEAs really easy to understand.
I like how you give information to support your evidence. I think you did a great job on your speech and I like how you give advice to the audience about moving forward and looking up to your future.
I like how you included stories from your personal life to set as an example and to help the readers understand better. Good job.
i like that you gave lot’s of example and you describe good your topic and your tiea are easy to understand
I like that you gave many examples during your speech like you gave stories of things that happened to you before.
I liked how you gave a lot of examples in the speech and that you talked about what you think about your future. Also in the TIEA I liked how you found the connections between the 3 texts you chose.
I really like the way you use many example in the TIEA. I think that your speech is very detailed and I think that you did a good job doing your example.
I like how you talk about your own experience in your speech. It makes your speech more relatable and easier to understand.
I like the way you used the vocabularies and how you tried to keep eye contract during the speech. In your first TIEA I also you think you did a good job describing the similarities.
You did a great job! I really like your Speech you make a lot of example on it and is very detailed. I like the way you use example on TIEA. I like your speech topic looking forward.
You did a good job using examples to support the main idea of the texts, and the speech was well written.
I like the way were you give examples to help you with your speech, and I also like the way you write your TIEA, it really detail and it clear.
I like the way how you used many examples including you own life experiences. Also I think it is really good of you to use different vocabularies. In the analysing part you did a really good job! 🙂
I like the way you used many examples from your self, you really describe your speech clearly
I like how you used personal experiences in your speech as evidence, because we can relate to it more. You also had detailed TIEA and it was clear and easy to understand.
I thought you use a few sentence to write your T.I.E.A. but it have many details in it, and in the speech you use you to be the example that was a good idea.
I really like the way how you describe examples from yourself, and how you talk about your own experience.
In your second T.I.E.A., you say everyone need to be honest, don’t lie to each others, that is important in our life. Also I like the idea of your speech because usually people will only focus on now and the past, not really care about future. Good job!