Great Job RenzoXD Really love the way you asked readers questions and make them think from your viewpoint. I feel so bad right now:( Your persuasive essay reminded me how I used to love the zoo that I would go there every holiday. But now thinking of it, zoos may not be the safest place for any animals. Some people, however, may feel like zoos are protecting these animals. Yes, that is right, but as you stated throughout your essay there might be more negative impacts of living in a zoo than positive ones. I also like the idea you suggested that we should cage ourselves rather than those poor animals; we might then understand the feelings of those organisms. However, don’t you think we will not be able to survive in that small amount of space too? We certainly have to take responsibilities of the harm we made on wild animals. I feel like conservation groups should provide more education to the next generation so all people at all times can understand how we are merely a strand in the web of life. Whatever we do to the web, the Earth, the animals, we do to ourselves.
Great Job RenzoXD Really love the way you asked readers questions and make them think from your viewpoint. I feel so bad right now:( Your persuasive essay reminded me how I used to love the zoo that I would go there every holiday. But now thinking of it, zoos may not be the safest place for any animals. Some people, however, may feel like zoos are protecting these animals. Yes, that is right, but as you stated throughout your essay there might be more negative impacts of living in a zoo than positive ones. I also like the idea you suggested that we should cage ourselves rather than those poor animals; we might then understand the feelings of those organisms. However, don’t you think we will not be able to survive in that small amount of space too? We certainly have to take responsibilities of the harm we made on wild animals. I feel like conservation groups should provide more education to the next generation so all people at all times can understand how we are merely a strand in the web of life. Whatever we do to the web, the Earth, the animals, we do to ourselves.