I would say the feature of “inquirer” describes my approach to writing this essay because I researched information online to extend my knowledge for supporting my paper. I was being curious and desired to find out the answers and have a better understanding, which allows me to develop inquiring and researching skills.
I am most proud of my contentions in my essay which are the power, sustainability and future development of the sun. I think I organized its numerous advantages into 3 main points well.
Next I write an essay I will try to find more reliable and updated sources because I think some of my datas were not been updated yet. Also, I will try to write more strong sentences that could convince my reader more powerfully.
After looking at sorts of research and finishing my paper, I discovered that it is impossible for us to rely on only one energy source because every energy source has both advantage and disadvantage. We should use more renewable source and back up their disadvantage with other energy source to reach a balance environment.