On September 5, there’s a man wearing a gray shirt riding on his bike crossing the street. He is sort of short and skinny. He rides his bike slowly. Suddenly the sky becomes darker and it starts raining, the rain is getting bigger and bigger. The man forced to stops his bike and takes his umbrella out as fast as he can. He stops for a little while and starts making his decision. Later he decided to keep continues riding his bike with one hand holding the umbrella. He still successfully keeps his balance while he is riding the bike. Last, he crossed the street and disappeared from the other side…
You did a really good job on your article, I really like it also it got really many details.
good story and that guy has good riding skills but is quite danger.
I think you did a good job telling the story and describing what the man riding the bicycle did~
Henry you did a great job describing what the man riding the bicycle and what the problem is.