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I like how you started the post with a powerful fact with impact with a clear thesis. Also I like how you strongly stated your own opinion into the essay. I agree with you that humans should start to protect animals instead of taking away their fur in order to make expensive clothes.
I like how you started the post with a powerful fact with impact with a clear thesis. Also I like how you strongly stated your own opinion into the essay. I agree with you that humans should start to protect animals instead of taking away their fur in order to make expensive clothes.