Child Labor:
Child Labor is one of the worst problems worldwide, still many countries need to abolish Child Labor, mostly appear in developing countries. Worldwide 218 million children between 5-17 years are in employment, among them, 152 million are victims of child labor; almost half of them, over 100 million child laborers work in hazardous in agriculture, mining.
TIEA Summary (Topic sentence, Introduction, Evidence, Analysis)
Uprising, by Margaret Peterson Haddix, focuses on women’s right, Equality, and Equity, What’s the difference between Equity and Equality is equality denotes that everyone is at the same level. However, Equity doesn’t mean everyone is on the same level, but equity is everyone stands on different level according to their abilities, so they can all do the same thing.
In Uprising by Margaret Peterson Haddix uses examples of injustice towards women, but they eventually overcame their fears and decided to stand up for women’s right.
As they overcame their fears to this “Scary Place” they would finally willing to protest, their anger led these young women to a strike, so they started the strike.
“We will not be stupid girls!” “We will not be useless girls!” We will not be powerless girls!” (233)
Haddix’s choice to make female workers felt powerless and useless by examples of injustice which eventually triggered them, three young women, Bella, Yetta, and Jane led the union, they believed in women’s right, they believe there is a thing called gender equality, they think every woman deserves respect, every woman needs to be treated equally, they became adamant on this point and try to stop how people view them as useless people.
MLA Citation:
Haddix, Margaret Peterson. Uprising. Simon & Schuster BFYR, 2011.
Reflection: I did well on providing examples and evidence, because my evidence does support my topic sentence, I think i also did well Topic sentence, it provides substantial identification and explanation of the content, context, language, structure, technique, and style, However, it is missing the connection between concept and the story where I have to improve on.
What I need to improve on is based on Analysis, because I added new evidence into my analysis which was unnecessary, also the sentence was too long and difficult to understand.
Uprising Discussion:
We discussed the book “Uprising” quotes, questions, techniques.etc